Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Troy my name is Dylan from Ahipara School. I really like your story about the 3 billy goats it was funny, my favourite part in the story was where little red riding hood reported them. Maybe next time you could make the doc bigger. Blog you later
ReplyDeleteHi Tory my names Maiki I´m from Ahipara School. I like how you made your own part of the story and added charters from different fairy tales and the old troll was as in your worlds ¨NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN¨ Maybe next time you could like Dylan make your doc bigger.
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