Wednesday, April 1, 2020
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Hi Troy, fantastic writing here. I like the way that you described the bay as peaceful. Next time up load your writing on a slide or a doc as it will be easier to read on the blog. Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used humour in your writing! Great use of descriptive language too!, well done.
This is great writing Troy! Well done, Miss Smith's idea of popping it on a doc is a good idea because then it will stay all on one page- if you need help with this let me know.
ReplyDeleteHi Troy
ReplyDeleteThis is a quality piece of writing which made me laugh. You used descriptive words very well so that I got a picture in my mind while I was reading it. Look forward to more posts from you Troy. Mrs Pascoe