Monday, March 30, 2020
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Hi Troy, good use of simile saying 'it's like watching a circus' Have you been to a circus? Giraffes are fascinating creatures I think! great job
ReplyDeleteHi Troy, I really like the comparisons you have added into your story. By doing this the reader is able to feel a connection to something they already know.
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